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Narrative Writing 

When you write a narrative essay, you are telling a story. Narrative essays are told from a defined point of view.  When you tell the story there is feelings and an excitement of story.


The Hunted Eighth floor

  By: Aisha
  
    There was a camp came to the tour. They need place to stay for two nights. They stayed in hotel for two night, the room on the eight floor was haunted when the fellow  warned them that their room is haunted, they just laughed. There were a lot of crazy people out there who believed in ghosts and wanted to stay in a haunted hotel but the two girls name jenny and sandy weren't two of them. 

"Sandy said firmly," Jenny isn't this same hotel where we used to come when we were young." yes I remembered this is the same hotel where we lost our best friend Caroline," said jenny sadly.

They chosen calamity for their weekend because they would like the description of the hotel and it services, not because it had a ghost. 

Just for safety, sandy asked the fellow," who was supposed to haunt our room." He told them that" it was a ghost of a young girl who had been found murder on eighth floor room. She suicide because she didn't get her favorite doll." Sandy replied," that's so sad."

After that they went up to the eighth floor. As they neared there room, sandy gasped and grabbed jenny's arm. We stopped and sandy pointed, wide-eyed, toward the far end of the hallway. They saw the glowing figure of a young girl came hurrying toward them. 

Jenny shivered foolishly, her skin tingling in the sudden cold as she rushed passed  and walked right through the wall next to their room.

"Good lord, there really is a ghost in our room!" jenny gasped. "I am not going in there," sandy said firmly.

Her face was light and her black eyes were wide with fear.  Jenny didn't feel like going in there either, but they had gotten a special deal for two nights, paid in advance. I don't want to waste money!" jenny said." Jenny open the door, turned on the light, and check out every corner, looking for the young girl. She was disappeared.

  "I'm not going in their "sandy said." Sandy extremely refused to go in the haunted room.
 
In the end, jenny had to go down to the desk and request a room on another floor. " jenny said," Can I get another room please." The boy assigned them to a room on another floor.

Sandy barely got a shine of sleep that night. She kept waking up, afraid that the young girl with her doll would come walking through the wall and do horrible things to them. 

They were awake at morning and had checked out of the calamity by breakfast time the next day. They investigate what exactly happen jenny and sandy checked all eighth floor rooms.

 " Sandy said, "I found some clothes." That's same exact clothes what young girl wearing yesterday night" said jenny." jenny and sandy gasped." 

They was so scared ." Jenny said, "we need do figure this out. Next morning sandy and jenny were sitting by the swimming pool. Suddenly sandy saw a girl glared at her." Sandy said, I saw that girl somewhere." Jenny gasped, that's the same girl we saw that night." The girl suddenly ran away beyond that sandy and jenny follow the young girl.

The young girl disappeared. We asked people around there if they saw a young girl, but none of them did not saw a girl.

   "Jenny said, maybe she would come tonight." We should awake all the night, "sandy said." They awake all night waiting for the young girl, but the she did not came. The next morning they went to the same place where they saw the girl yesterday. 

They was waiting for the girl."Sandy said, it's getting too long I cant stay here anymore lets go."Jenny said, Yes you are right lets go."When they were leaving they saw the same girl."Jenny and sandy gasped."The young girl said," leave this hotel or else I will kill you leave." Jenny said firmly," why do you want only us to leave this hotel?
 
Why not the other people?"Caroline said," remembered me I'm your childhood friend Caroline." Sandy said," Caroline." Caroline said, yes I want you both of them to leave, because you guys  remind me of my doll remembered, when my father bring a beautiful doll for me, but then jenny like that doll too and my father gave it to you. I argued for that doll to my father."

   "Jenny said," but that wasn't my fault!" Sandy said," why did you suicide?" "Caroline said," because my father never slap me before, he slap me cause of jenny and then I left from there and I get in to my room and lock up myself, and then I suicide.

"Jenny said," please forgive me I never thought that you would suicide in fact I was coming to give you that doll, but maybe I did too late, but I love that doll and I still have it.

" Caroline said happily, really!"Sandy said," yes we still have that doll and never play with it." Jenny said," Caroline my friend please forgive me.

"Caroline said," fine I will forgive you in one condition if you give me my doll back." Jenny said happily,” of course the doll is belongs to you." From that day on jenny and sandy live their life happily, and Caroline's spirit got free from the eighth floor room.